Decent work mate but there are few things which you need to improve. Make render smaller and also I'm not sure if it's proportional, you have to hold shift while re sizing. Maybe to add more texture work, you know to make everything even more interesting. Because of render size it's very difficult to find spot for your text, after you make render smaller use some simple font like Times New Roman, Arial, Trajan Pro and I'm sure they'll look fine but remember to add nice effects to text also. Good luck mate
