First mate make the title like switch said ok

Well its quite a nice style and idea mate Well first keep the renders body in colour so then we know where the spatter and other colours are coming from mate Try blurring the light work more and also try spattering the body with some spatter clipping mask and then make the spatter spread out more in different colours mate Text is good well blended there KIU

It is not bad mate.
the colours don't fit imo. The text dosen't fit either change the effects on it and the font and make it smaller and change the colours. The render isn't good imo i don't like the effects on it mate but it is ok. add a stadium and a double render mate. The textures are ok but could be much better blend them better and add more mate. The border is fine mate fits well. KIU mate

It might be better if you used a different render, even though it's desaturated, it still doesn't fit very well. Although, I don't know if any of his jersey colors would fit with that color scheme. I like the concept though, and the text looks good with the background. Gj