It's ok mate but it could be better with little more work Render is ok but his face is too bright. Work also on blending. Texture work looks alright although it's too simple, try to add more stuff mate BG is good but try with more layers of BG textures mate, and also add some blue or red colors to it. Text isn't that good mate, try simple font and better position. Maybe to try to work by following tutorials mate Keep practicing

Ok sig mate. It could be better just needs a little more work. Render is ok but his face is to bright. Blend it more. Add some more texture work. BG is ok but add more BG textures and light work to it. Text isn't so good mate. Try a better font and it needs positioned better. Follow some tuts mate.
KIU mate I hope to see you improve

It's so simple. All could improved. Add more texture. Render is ok but his face is too bright. Text really bad. Keep practicing.

use different colors and you working font to much ...and renders need some efeckt...