I think that looks prety well



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Yes it's not bad mate. But I don't like the green color very much. That's not bad, it's just not really my style. The render could have some more effects, BG is simple. Text can be better. Not a bad one mate, keep practicing and you will improve soon!

well the render looks fine but you can blend it a bit and also make the colors stand out more
the backqround could be better lower the opacity on the textures and stocks
for the text try simple fonts and make it look interestinq stay active m8