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the text really doesnt fit it looks bad the stroke on text doesnt fit either, text along bottom of sig is too visible and isnt fitting to well, render looks a bit small, render work and effects can be better try adding some better textures, the sig looks cut off into two parts with the render the the text try blend it all together as one, add a border to this aswell, kiu mate keep practising

tnx for comment, more ? :P

My advice mate, try to follow tutorials and after some practice try to make your own style. This work is ok but a lot of things aren't in the right place. Render is too small. Textures must be better applied. BG is too simple, try to add more textures. Use simple PS default fonts, they are the best. Keep practicing mate

thx for help m8s

Render is badly re sized and positioned. it should be bigger mate. you dont have to show his whole body
Render work is bad, you could blend the render better and add a lot more stuff.
Text looks LQ and the stroke doesnt fit. sorry mate
background looks okay. Take a look at out tutorial section mate! it will help
kiu