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its way too dark mate add some light work to it and some brighter colours, the text is too simple and can be improved a lot, the left side needs some attention, maybe add some texture work to this, border is ok but hardly visible because the sig is soo dark, keep working on it mate kiu

I think the lightning work is too exaggerated try lighten it up a little. The effects could be better, try adding up some light textures and such to make some nice effects. Colors could be better. You should make the border more visible because it's nearly invisible because of the dark colors. KIU, mate, stay active!

It's too dark mate. Add more lights on the feets. The render isn't very good. KIU