Once again this style

well imo colours looks not fit at all man
bg could be alot better the spatter looks not good
to many text imo ther's no conect to to the rest
add some effects on the render//
lightigng looks good
keep practice man stay active

In my opinion all those colors don't look qood, you should use colors similar to the colors of the render. The render could be improved with some blendinq or effects and some text with his name would help

sorry mate i see youve gone for a unique style but it hasnt payed off. the colours clash too much. the render effects could be alot better, text could be better aswell. kiu mate