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hey welcome i like the text its nice the render needs blending and the fragment effect's opacity could be lowered also delete in some parts for a better effect i dont like the right side of the bg it doesn't fit with the rest

overall its a good attempt but could be improved keep trying mate

please enter this in sotw, what have you got to lose?

The bg is ok but doesn't fit well with the render. The render is too blurry and you could lower the opacity of the fragment effect. The text is ok, but could be better. Keep practicing mate.

bg is ok, but try to match the bg colors with the render colors text needs improvement, lower the opacity of the fragment effect and blend the render

bg is nice, render could be a lot better, render need more work and blend..
keep trying

I cannot see it :_S

bg and the text could be alot better the render effects are overdone, tone it down abit, kiu mate check out a few tuts