Hey Guys 2nd post yet
Sorry, im no good with text...



C+C please

The effect on the render is brilliant. I think that the text is good, but it could be positioned more so that was easier to see. Although, i still really like it.

Not bad ,effect on render is perfect ,text and stroke is too good

I like it render and bg is great just dont like the grey bars Text is good also

the text needs improvements, and i don't like the gray stripes.. the bg is a bit too busy, tone it down a little and change the colors so that they match the render colors render effects are very good, but blending could be better

bg is busy and could be better in my opinion, render is nice but i don't like the distort, text could be better too keep practising

hey thx for the comments guys i will work on the my blending and text techniques,
the only way is up for me...

Well..
On this, there are ups and downs. I like the light, contrasts and the render, but I don't like the background. The c4d render makes the whole sig very busy, and i don't like the scanlines. The b/w-lines is not good imo. The stroke is okay. The text needs improvement, but it's hard to put text on such busy sigs as this one..

The text could do with some work, and the background may be a bit over the top.

Still, good work.

Keep it up.

The render is very nice. The bg and text could be better. kiu