I'm still a begginer, so constructive criticism welcome

improves the bg, text and work is nice, render and work is improves, burns sides, system size, is not so beautiful

The texture work behind the render doesn't look that good mate, also work more on the render and background, the text could be better as well

Pretty cool mate but try too make it 500x200
Really good actually KIU

I'm still gettin used to making big peices because i'm used to 350*150, so i didn't want to go too big and run out of ideas. THanks for the comments guys!