my best so far....hope you like it ....and some comments pls!

The render effects aren't so good, the spatter could work better. The colors could be better, they seem too pink and I don't understand why the 'Ricardo' text is beeing green. Text could be better too. I think you should add some more effects with light textures etc. Lightning is fine, but bg isn't so good, it could be better. KIU, mate, read some tuts and you'll improve!