malouda
v1

v2

c+c plz

Not bad mate, the BG is ok, but much to bright. Make it darker. Render is also a bit bright, but it's good though. Text is simple, but not bad. Just keep practicing mate, you are improving!

Everthing is great,i have only one remark it's too bright really,you should edit it.

im with the other guys too bright.

thx for comments
V2

Hello
Good design
But sweeping some background work and the impact on the fingers need to be modified and the text needs some influences

Accept open to traffic

bye

render needs blending
text are cool
& bg could be better

backqround could be better m8 work on it more
and the render has to much liqht but it's fine
and the text could have a better font : ]

don't bad mate, but the bg it's too simple, the text could be better, and render this very
illuminated, although not this badly mate

Well chosen colors. Its a good sig, I like v2. There are only 2 little things: I don't like the text, so find a better text and use some text effects and it will be OK. The other thing is the blending. Blend your render every time.. It looks more better, if you are blending it.

bit to bright mate but overall i would rate it 8/10

v2 is better, but I don't like the text