C&C?

Ill try to make my posts more better, anyways to begin:

Ill comment on this because it has no posts! I gotta help a mate around here. Well, to be honest, the bg needs to be more "clear". What i mean is, without the shadows. I also think that this needs more lightning, it looks like you reduced the opacity of the lightning spots. It's okay if thats your style, but just a suggestion. Overall, i'd rate this a 6.5/10

well the render needs some blendinq m8 and also sharpen the siqnature
not so sure about the backqround it could be better and the text could have a better font and style

there is a lot of things are missing Like : riena photos and splatter brushes ..
the font is not that good ..
7/10
thxx