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07-17-2008, 11:14 AM #1

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http://i37.tinypic.com/2w6f0hz.jpg

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07-17-2008, 05:05 PM #2

Looks allright, but needs some work.

Render is to big, make it a lot smaller. Effects are fine, and textures looks good.
Background needs some work. Add some more textures, and some lightning work.
Font is fine, but could be better.
Colors are not that good, don't think the warm colors fits the blue render.

Keep practising mate, take a look at some tutorials

07-17-2008, 07:34 PM #3

Render is too large, try to improve that mate

Textures are ok but they could be better, they seems kinda misplaced imo. BG is too simple and it needs more work, try with more layers mate

Font is excellent but overall text work could be much better. Whole work have some strange color, next time pay attention to that part

Keep practicing mate

07-18-2008, 08:57 AM #4

sorry but it was stock and it can not be smaller

so thanks for coments

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