hello
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http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/b...g?t=1189678556

same style as your ro7's one
BG is too dark man
add some textures , lighting effects ...
render 's color is not good enough man
keep trying huh

i see you tryed the same style as cr7, well this one is a little better exicuted but it still needs ALOT f improvement,

+ the render colour is yet again far far too much
+ the bg is too empty and dark
+ and the brushing isnt that good

keep trying mate if you stick around you will get better

kiu

Background is too dark and simple render is ok but need a better blend text could be better keep practising mate