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render is nice bg is too busy and need some bright, text could be better and more visible keep practising mate

bg is way too busy, even if you work a lot with it, keep it simple and smooth to make it smooth, add a gaussian blur layer.. colors needs improvements, atm they are too saturated and monotone.. some soft brushes, gradients or fill layers are good options to make the colors look better.. render blending is ok, but the render needs a lot more work.. lighten it up some places, and add some effects.. don't overdo it, keep it simple but eye catching put the text layer on top of everything else, change the font and color