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its ok but its a bit simple by the look it, text can be improve try adding some effects, the render needs some work try adding some effects to it to make it more interesting, background isnt to bad but can be improved a lot try adding some colour to this sig and some extra light effects, keep working on this mate kiu

The render looks very simple mate some blendinq or some work in it would help, the backqround could be better those brushes are too simple, and the text are also too simple keep practicinq mate.

i think that the render needs more attention .. try adding som colors so it can be more exciting .. brushes in the back are not that good "the rising sun bg looks good" text could be alot better .. KIU