Nakamura by ~JMLDK on deviantART

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The render effects are ok, but could be improved. Blending could be bit better. Render is placed a little bad imo, he should be in the middle or something. Bg is too plain, work more on it. Text could need some more work. Lightning and colors are ok. KIU!

Thanks for the comment mate..
I will work on the stuff

nice signature, it got potential mate.

Background is to plain. Think you should add some textures or stadium/clouds etc.
The render work is ok, but i think you should add some effects on his shirt. Could be some sort of coullering or the same effect as you made a tut with. It could also be some sort of blur etc. Dont like the line from his waste, think you should remove that. In my opinion you should also remove the texture on his left shoulder.
But the effects you have allready have added looks nice, and colours are nice. The render is nicely blended.
The font is good, and colour is good too and fits the render. The second font(the red one) could be a bit more visible. You should also put the opacity of the celtic font up, its kind of hard to see.

Looks nice and as i said if you improve it a bit it will look real nice.

The BG Looks Ok...Lighting Is Nice...The BG Needs Some Improvments Though Imo...
The Stock Looks Ok...Effects Can Be Better , Blending Looks Nice..The Textures Looks OK...
The Text Is Ok..But It's Too Big Imo..Keep Working Mate...

A new one is added. Comments?

Nice! You've improved all of the stuff I've said. Thumbs up, way to go

the stock fits really better now
color is good
text is better, but can be improved
lighting is very nice
shapes and pattern are very nice
keep it up
and I don't need to say 'stay active' for you

man, I hate you

haha. Thanks for the comments guys

It's An Improvment Mate....The BG Looks Ok..The Textures Look Fine..Lighting Work Is Good..The Stock Looks Much Better Now..Is Niceley Blended..The Effects Are Good...The Lighting Is Good..The Texturs Looks Nice...But I Still Think That The Text Can Be Improved...Keep Working Mate...

v2 is better mate.

The background is better and more interesting and looks fit now.
Effects is better and so is the colour, like the effect at the bottom of the render.
Still think the text could be better. But the colour is better now. I think you should change the font, but keep the colour. You could also add a "japan and celtic" text or something like that.

Keep it up, good v2

Thanks mate. Your right about the text. I will change the font to another.

Render is very nice. I prefer the v1 she's better. Player's effect look nice. Background is very class. Text is good but i think he can be better. KIU Good sig JML

Thanks for the comments mate.

I have tried a new with a new text. Comments?