render's effect is ok,but bg is too black

Influence good background and also ... Line if you changed the better.

the render looks kinda blurred man and the clippinq mask looks poor sorry
and there are 2 many effects on the render try to make it look qood m8 don't ovrerdone it : ]
backqround looks simple but qoes with the rest but not so sure about the style of the text man : ]]

I just tried something new but next time I'll continue my old style, thank you for your comments

Very good sig!

The red should be just a little bit more. The rest is very very nice!!

Okay, the BG isn't that great to, but the attention is on the render, wich I like