I tried a different style this time.



V.2:



V.3 [following -P1- advice]:



Comments please!

I think a black/white gradient map on soft light would look good
change the font and it all fits well

Thanks for the advice I'll give it a try to see how it looks

I stayed boa, alone I find that you would be able to better the bottom, it yield I turned out well, the typography of the for the improve.

cheers,
bitner

the render could be a lot better and the distort isn't very good, the background need more work and looks low quality in some parts text could be better keep practising mate try read some tutorials and download resources

well to be honest none of the fonts used on the siqs are qood
the renders are 2 small and the bq is kinda busy
btw the effects used on the rendders are badd.

The doubled render isn't good, it's irritating in some way. The bg looks low quality, and none of the fonts are good.