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not bad mate,but i think it's too simple. add some more textures to the bg,maybe a 2º picture of Given,and add some more lighting textures to the render,text is nice,kiu mate

Good wall mate . Maybe try with other sizes. Yellow color fits very well, good work, i like it. Render is good, nice blended, good render effects, his colors could be better, fits nice, is placed well. Remove the pattern from his face and body. You use good splatter brushes, nice work with clipping masks. I like your textures, nice blended, fits ok but add more on the bg, is too simple. Add more effects on the work. Good lightings, fits good. You use good fonts, has a nice effects and colors but this white need more improvements. Nice stroke. KIU .