Ryan Babel ~ .SFX & skrapZee

05:17 PM

He started:

I finished:

(Not my best finish i admit)

Comments?

(Great start btw mate

)

05-28-2008, 05:21 PM #2

Yeah very good start by skrapzee there wasnt much to finish after that great start

Good colours and textures and text is good

KIu nice work guys

05-28-2008, 05:25 PM #3

Fine work mate.

The background is okay, but maybe add a couple of more textures with a low opacity or a second render.
Render effects are really nice, but texture work could be better, think it fills to much and looks kind of blurred.
The babel font is nice, but the ryan font could be better, remove it or change it.
Colors are okay, and so is lightning. Think you should add some more lightning work on the background.

05-28-2008, 06:33 PM #4

cool thanks for the comments

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