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Quite like this one myself, not sure if I want to add more to it or not though. Bring on the crits guys, cheers.

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add more effects and colour to the text, i think the render could be bigger and maybe add more of his body, the render effect could be improved, the background is ok but i think there is just too much i think you should make the size 1024x768 so there doesnt look so much blank space, kiu mate

The BG Can Be Improved Mate...The Textures Are Ok...But Can Be Better Mate....The Colours Are Ok ... Lighting Work Looks Good....The Render Is Too Plain Mate....Add Some Nice Effexts Onto It....The Colours Are Bad Imo...Blending Is Ok...The Lighting Can Be Improved....The Brushes Behind It Don't Fit Imo....The Text Is Too Simple Mate...Font Looks Ok....Keep Working Mate..Keep Active...

Render is ok. Textures too, but i think you can more work on the render and on the textures. Effects on the player aren't very good and you must more work the text. KIU

I think the use of textures could be better, it seems waaay too bright around the render. Text could be better and blending too. I think bg is ok, but not my style in a wp, i prefer bg simple . Lightning could be slightly better. KIU, mate!

the effects on the player needs work... the text looks fine... try to add some more textures
KIU mate