as original? said, you don't have to put a lot in there to cover it up, the simple and clean style often look at least as good as the complicated ones, if not better

bg is very plain and looks a bit boring cuz of that, try to add depth to it (one way to do this is to blend in a stock).. just experiment with stocks (they often look best desaturated and on low opacity) and textures (look good both in original colors and desaturated, try different layer modes).. brushes can also be used, but keep them simple then, don't overdo it

colors could be a lot better, you want the whole piece of art to blend well and look "complete", and then you always have to make the bg colors match the render colors.. in this case the color isn't the best and it is very monotone, it should also be darker..
with that said you need to lighten up the render

he has dark colored clothes and shoes and it's overall a dark render, so you have to work on the lighting to liven it up.. experiment with some simple but nice effects to make it more eye catching and make it stand out from the rest, but again don't overdo it

and always remember to blend the render, if you need help on that have a look at our tutorials

text is ok but you can easily make it look better, change the font to a more simple one cuz of the simple style on this wall (we've got some great ones in our resources section) and try a different color
in my opinion it would also look a lot better without those grainy dots brushes or whatever it is
hope this helps you out a bit