comments please,i need to improve

i think you've got a great base, that has great potential
everything looks good but the bg needs more done to it and when you've done this you can blend the render into the bg (slightly)
the only main problem i have with this is the text, imo it doesnt work

bg:
too simple atm, and the effect you've used makes it look low quality.. it lacks depth and it is very boring.. colors you've used are good though, they match the render colors..
experiment with gradients, brushes, stocks, textures++, and keep working till you get a simple and clean bg that is interesting or eye catching if you keep it smooth, it makes the wall comfortable too look at

render:
the main part of the render looks good, it is smooth and the colors are good, it's good on the eye the effects used are not the best though, the splatter or smudge thing is too sharp and too defined, and the motion blur look isn't very good.. keep practicing and keep the effects simple (as you have)

text:
low opacity text in the bg is ok but i don't like the wave look..
you can easily make the main text look a lot better if you spend just a little more time working on it, you don't have to do much to make it interesting or eye catching change font, change the colors of it so that they match the bg colors and the render colors better and remove (or tone down and blur) the shadow effect..

glad to help

Originally Posted by meh

bg:
too simple atm, and the effect you've used makes it look low quality.. it lacks depth and it is very boring.. colors you've used are good though, they match the render colors..
experiment with gradients, brushes, stocks, textures++, and keep working till you get a simple and clean bg that is interesting or eye catching if you keep it smooth, it makes the wall comfortable too look at

render:
the main part of the render looks good, it is smooth and the colors are good, it's good on the eye the effects used are not the best though, the splatter or smudge thing is too sharp and too defined, and the motion blur look isn't very good.. keep practicing and keep the effects simple (as you have)

text:
low opacity text in the bg is ok but i don't like the wave look..
you can easily make the main text look a lot better if you spend just a little more time working on it, you don't have to do much to make it interesting or eye catching change font, change the colors of it so that they match the bg colors and the render colors better and remove (or tone down and blur) the shadow effect..

glad to help

Me and Meh continue to post comments like this and it seems it doesn't get appreciated byt the creator
Overall nice base for a great wall you just need to develop more on it
Render is ok as is text but it needs more work

Originally Posted by scottytrent

Me and Meh continue to post comments like this and it seems it doesn't get appreciated byt the creator

i like that kind of comments. instead of just say what is bad you say how we can improve

thanks for the comments

Originally Posted by meh

bg:
too simple atm, and the effect you've used makes it look low quality.. it lacks depth and it is very boring.. colors you've used are good though, they match the render colors..
experiment with gradients, brushes, stocks, textures++, and keep working till you get a simple and clean bg that is interesting or eye catching if you keep it smooth, it makes the wall comfortable too look at

render:
the main part of the render looks good, it is smooth and the colors are good, it's good on the eye the effects used are not the best though, the splatter or smudge thing is too sharp and too defined, and the motion blur look isn't very good.. keep practicing and keep the effects simple (as you have)

text:
low opacity text in the bg is ok but i don't like the wave look..
you can easily make the main text look a lot better if you spend just a little more time working on it, you don't have to do much to make it interesting or eye catching change font, change the colors of it so that they match the bg colors and the render colors better and remove (or tone down and blur) the shadow effect..

glad to help

I agree

A good base man. But it's to simple for a very good wallpaper. It needs more effects. Render and bg are okay, text is a bit bad.

Mmm.. Not great but not ugly.

Originally Posted by scottytrent

Me and Meh continue to post comments like this and it seems it doesn't get appreciated byt the creator
Overall nice base for a great wall you just need to develop more on it
Render is ok as is text but it needs more work

Originally Posted by andre

i like that kind of comments. instead of just say what is bad you say how we can improve

thanks for the comments

Yeah, I love those comments of yours, they're like tutorials and they give me lots of help, I like to know exactly what I should change and how I should do it, the other simple comments don't help me, just say to me if I did a good job or a bad job.

So keep with that kind of comments, because they help us a lot!

P.S.- days ago I was actually thinking on sending you a message (scottytrent) to ask you to make a comment to a new sig of mine like you did on my sig of Rui Costa, because I was competing on a battle and I was needing your advices but then it was the deadline and I posted my entry, I won the battle but my sig was not a great work